To me, the lyrics are the stars in this brilliant production.  Phil, your vocal is poignant and real.  Danny, your playing is terrific, and I like the energy level of this song.  I'm sure any tweaks you make will only enhance this song, but you're already 99% there. 

I'm getting a clicking sound in the right speaker in my cans, think it's from the guitar (might be my headphones?!). Drums are a bit flat, could be a bit more punch on the kick and snare. The lead tone is to die for. Nice effort guys, I feel there is a little room for improvement.
 
All the best,
   Gus

bapu
Thanks to Uncle Philz for asking me to play the bass.

No, Bapu... Thank YOU!

Wookiee
Good band gathered around you here Phil, sounds OK here, perhaps the tweaks noted by others will just put that extra polished shine on a it.
 
Thanks for sharing Phil around of applause to all the band.

Thank you, John.

Dan- Thanks, and you're right on the mixer.
 
Jimmy- Thanks for the kind words.
 
Warren- Many thanks.

Nice tune.   Really good lyrics, solid performances.  Guitars sound great, both the acoustics and electrics.
 
Mix-wise I think the kick may be a little "clicky", or maybe it's the frequency of the click that stands out.  And the harmony during the chorus sounds a bit odd for some reason... though I can't put my finger on it - I'm not sure if it's just not blending well with the lead or if it's a tonality thing.   Minor points though.
 
Oh, and the solo at the end rocks.  
 

Wow... What an amazingly powerful song.
 
It must be great to collaborate like that...

Monty- Thanks for the listen and comments.
Tim- Thanks
Mark- Thanks for the kind words.