2015/03/23 03:18:49
drma173

Please give me a honest opinion on production & material. I collaborated for the first time with a new friends of mind name "Rikan." Which you'll guys could hear in the future on a song with Cian Mcgovern I think most of you guys are familiar with, he's amazing. We been performing this song all over New York City in open mic venues. For those who think this song is a sample because it hip hop and is garbage music. Think again because i  composed and produce all musical elements.
 
Original Version which is in español

2015/03/25 22:39:11
drma173
Guess no ones felling it
2015/03/26 00:25:55
Venus
Big booty songs are "in" now. I can appreciate that. Not as much bass as I would expect for this genre but that may have been lost in upload transference?
2015/03/26 04:52:44
SongCraft
Your vocals are cool and as for the actual song structure and style? Excellent.
 
Minor Critiques:
1) Bass sub-lo does not translate well on small speakers however, on larger speakers and sub or headphones its sounds great. That is such an unfortunate outcome... typical upper frequencies are lacking on that bass.  What I do for all my songs is layer two bass sounds, one is sub and body the other has the upper freq 'attack/bite' (without the plucky/pick sound) and then balance it all just right in the mix.
 
2) The main synth voc/saw/res sound needs a tad more 'saw' (bite) and/or use automation (track envelope) as a means to morph/sweep (parameter changes) smoothly.  I always add automation manually to dramatically limit the amount of envelope 'Nodes'.
 
I cannot comment on any Y/Tube, I guess its because my Google+ is set to private, But at least I can Like and Subscribed to your Y/Tube.  Wish you all the best!
 
 
2015/03/30 20:26:54
MarkusClinus
Drma - not really my thing - but you did a really good job on this - you've got a lot of talent my friend.
2015/04/05 14:45:48
RussjWhite
All sounds good in my cans. mix is clear and the sub bass really works.
 
nicely done.
Gus
2015/04/05 16:59:00
Lynn
Although bass shy, this is perfect in all other respects, Tony.  You've truly mastered the use of vocal f/x, and your arranging just gets better and better.  I can't wait to hear your work with Cian.  I think you're on a roll so keep it up!
2015/04/06 08:52:34
Wookiee
Bass is translating well here on the monitors, not my thing but you seem to have a handle on it.
 
Thanks for sharing.
2015/04/06 11:00:46
davdud101
I think(hope) I may have some credibility for commenting here....
I think the lead rap vocal could be a little brighter and compressed just to come out a little more above the instrumental.
I'm not into hip-hop that's about stuff like this, but I like the music for sure
2015/04/11 03:16:59
drma173
Oh you will Lynn I hope. You will like it man. Was sup almost done with it.
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