Your vocals are cool and as for the actual song structure and style? Excellent.
Minor Critiques:
1) Bass sub-lo does not translate well on small speakers however, on larger speakers and sub or headphones its sounds great. That is such an unfortunate outcome... typical upper frequencies are lacking on that bass. What I do for all my songs is layer two bass sounds, one is sub and body the other has the upper freq 'attack/bite' (without the plucky/pick sound) and then balance it all just right in the mix.
2) The main synth voc/saw/res sound needs a tad more 'saw' (bite) and/or use automation (track envelope) as a means to morph/sweep (parameter changes) smoothly. I always add automation manually to dramatically limit the amount of envelope 'Nodes'.
I cannot comment on any Y/Tube, I guess its because my Google+ is set to private, But at least I can Like and Subscribed to your Y/Tube. Wish you all the best!