Here we go! Good mellow vibe, nice arrangement of instruments.
I'd bring the vocals up, we need to hear them in a vocal-driven track like this.
I would also look at the bass guitar, it gets a little raspy in spots, you might eq more top end off of it. What bass are you using?
I noticed your background vocals during the chorus seem to stray a bit in timing from your lead vocal. I personally don't think you need those backing vocs at all.
Your false ending was another thing, the fading electric guitars, I was thinking where's the bridge!!! But I definitely liked the acoustic guitar outtro.
nice, keep up the good work!
cheers,
-Tom