Ryan, this has the quintessential metal guitar tone and solo. You have that much down pat. However, the rest of the mix is problematic. The vocals are so buried that they are indiscernible. Maybe that's the way you want it, but that's far from the norm for this genre. The toms sound like cardboard and take much of the energy level away from the drums. And, overall, the mix seems to lack punch even though you're playing some kick-ass parts. Perhaps, if you A/B your mix with someone similar, you can fill in the blanks yourself. Still, this has promise with a few tweaks and is waiting to be stellar with the right mix. Good luck!