Firstly, a great song it is! Your lyrics wrap around the arrangement very nicely. Your singing has plenty of actual conviction and emotion.
 
Mix-wise, the first thing I noticed is the phasey acoustic guitars. Is this comb filtering? Did you copy a part and then shift it around a little?
 
I'd bring the drums up - but the phaseyness extends to the hi hat as well. Is this a Soundcloud de-resolutuinizing down to 128mp3? It kind of sounds like 22. If that makes sense.
 
Still a great song shines through!
 
cheers,
-Tom

Thanks very much for taking the extra time Tom.
I'll have to think on the phasey issue as I didn't copy any tracks but played a second track along with the first.
Interesting on the cross track phase vs Soundcloud as this seems more likely knowing the above.
I'll have to try the option of rendering directly to soundcloud from Sonar to see if that fixes it.
Thanks again.

Nice song!   I really liked the lyrics + melody, and the instrumentation supports it well.   Sounds fairly balanced here, with a good amount of punch for an acoustic based tune.
 

Thank you very much Steve. I appreciate the added comment.