James will probably fix this right up for you. As it is now it's a bit thick in mid freq.

jamesyoyo
if you want, PM me and I will mix this for you.

Apologies for my prolonged silence, I appeared to get locked out my account and Cakewalk have been working on it since! Now fully back up and running.
 
Did you get my PM, sent the same day my account died, so not sure if it went through or not?

I like that!!  I can't really comment on the mix because I'm listening on tiny computer speakers, but the song is quite good.  I really like the guitar interlude beginning at 1:10.  That could almost be a song in itself.  And the piano was a great addition at the end.  Very very well done.
 
Best of luck with your music!!

jude77
I like that!!  I can't really comment on the mix because I'm listening on tiny computer speakers, but the song is quite good.  I really like the guitar interlude beginning at 1:10.  That could almost be a song in itself.  And the piano was a great addition at the end.  Very very well done.
 
Best of luck with your music!!

Thanks man, much appreciated! A couple of my tracks are like that, a couple of songs dumped together!!!  Check out Reverie on my page, 3 completely different songs as 1!! 

Cool tune, love the laid back yet dark feel.   Nicely different style.
 
Mix-wise, I think it's the drums, one chugging guitar part (I think?) and vocals right down the middle that are congesting things and fighting for space.   The guitars at the outside are more transparent and clear, even the slightly dirty ones.   If I were doing this, I'd spread the drum kit pieces a bit more and maybe EQ the snare so it's out of the vocal's way, and pan the middle guitar out a bit. 
 

Thanks for all the comments and feedback people. As you'd have seen above, Jamesyoyo has had a go at mixing it, and I'm definitely liking what he did with it:
 
https://soundcloud.com/awesmusic/doubt-mix2

I just listened to James' mix and it sounded pretty damned good to me.

Well, I for one like it quite a bit!

That's a nice mix James.

Phil, James:

Thanks. This is a good tune that really hit me just right. It was only a few hours to get it where I wanted it.