Hi. It's me again.
 
This piece was written 1 month ago.
Nothing much to say.. just write and upload.
 
about forest nearby my home.
 
 
https://soundcloud.com/acoustic_lov/sketch-foreset

You know, it's well done but once again with no video, vocal or lead instrument it's hard to place it in any landscape in my mind.  The music is beautiful .  The mix level seemed a bit "hot" in spots kinda like the keyboard was a bit distorted, but not much.  The music is beautiful 

I agree with evadianepug about the mix level.  Seems a little strong to me.  You might benefit from having more dynamic range.  Maybe make some of the "softer" parts even softer.  I could see going way down at the 30 second mark and having the string line you wrote create a really strong build-up.
 
Great brass sound - what are you using?

Yeah I like the brass too. Totally would work for some interlude music on a PBS show. Is your forest anywhere near Downton Abbey?
 
I found myself focusing on the drummer's cadence, and I'm not sure I wanted to focus on that. From the listener's perspective, at least me anyway, I found it distracting from trying to follow the movement of the other elements. Drums like that usually infer that there's a battle upcoming or something military is going on, but the rest of your song brought very different imagery to my mind.
 
Oh, well, some forests have drummers, I guess!
 
nice work, nice orchestration!
 
cheers,
-Tom
 
 

Hi.
I'm very glad to know about mix level issue and various interpretation of this.
Maybe I have non-sensitive ear Haha. Joke.
 
Thanks. really.

Superbly performed. Composition is truly outstanding (strong melodies throughout).  
 
In my opinion, instrumentation-arrangements are a bit constant, particularly the piano (which is very beautiful) but too much of this throughout lessens the impact and diversity of changes in the composition -- you did hold off in some parts, though I felt it was not quite enough. Subtleties, sometimes even silence can be just a magical and have just as much impact as sudden peaks (ensemble attack).  As someone else mentioned, watch those peaks!
 
Your great talent would be ideal for music placement in films/movies. I wish you great success!