2015/02/14 17:33:24
Starise
Hello folks!
I sat down to write a more complicated composition, started playing with bass and this is what happened. The vocals are a one track thing...IOW I haven't really worked them any and I probably should. This kind of veers from my recent direction but it was a lot of fun to make.
I put it up on SC..didn't like it...made the track private for a few days to work on it and just re activated public status. I appreciate OPs. Thanks!
https://soundcloud.com/starise/good-lovin
2015/02/14 18:06:54
Walt Collins
Sounds good to me Tim!
2015/02/14 19:19:51
kakku
Very nice going there. I liked it.
2015/02/14 19:53:44
gswitz
fun!
2015/02/14 20:22:04
markno999
Starise - Nice job, love this funky kind of stuff.   At :04 it sounded like a glitch happened (like a restart or skip)
The lead guitar is a little too loud (the fills during the verse).  Horns are cool.   Nice job on the vocals.  You could add some more vox harmonies but not necessary.
 
Wasn't crazy about the tempo change at :48.  Personally I would keep the rhythm section going throughout as this could be a good dance tune, the interlude could be distracting.    My opinion of course.   I like the song a lot.   It is funkalicious...:)
 
Regards
 
 
2015/02/15 11:31:49
emeraldsoul
Fun! I especially like the guitar work, pretty slick. Occasionally, your horn lines trample on your vocal. Background harmonies are a plus!!! Bass line works a treat. Love the groove . . .
 
Overall that snare/kick could be brought out just a bit more. A snappier, drier snare might suit, just a matter of taste, of course.
 
Level 42, anyone! Heaven 17? EW&F?
 
good stuff!
2015/02/15 13:59:39
clintmartin
Yeah, Level 42!!! Funky stuff...Love it!
2015/02/26 15:11:16
stevec
That is different for you...  
 
Cool funky groove.   Harmonies are nice.   Overall its got a cool 70's-ish vibe, catchy.
 
For the horns, I would personally pull back a little on the reverb, and maybe use a trumpet patch will more attack and really make those stabs hit.   You know, like EW&F.   
2015/02/27 00:14:35
gtrpastor
I like the funk guitar and the instrumental interplay. Good vocal work. My only crit is that that mix sounds tinny and somewhat distorted to my ear.
2015/02/27 10:07:09
Wookiee
It is good to step outside ones comfort zone and you definitely did that with this Tim.
 
It works here nice one Tim.
 
Thanks for sharing.
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