emeraldsoul
 
Level 42
 

Exactly what I was thinking! (them or Shakatak) Funky stuff Tim.

Walt- Thank you!
 
kakku-Thanks!
 
gswitz- Thanks for listening!
 
marno999- Thanks for your honest and helpful remarks. I'll look at the places you mentioned. I picked up on the slight glitch but I had hoped you wouldn't notice it :) It's gonna be a lot of trouble to get that edited out....so I left it in. I hear ya on keeping this moving. I was attempting to break it up slightly but I think in hindsight I should have introduced something less different later on in the song. I appreciate it!
 
emeraldsoul- I'll re examine where that horn line is trampling the vocals...and those drums...duly noted...Thank you!
 
clintmartin- I was hoping that this would sound kind of like that :) Thanks!
 
stevec- Ok Steve...so come on over and we can work on this one ;)...I keep trying to collab with you on something...maybe one day? The horns are from Komplete. Pro session horns I think. It has the trumpets you mention in it...so I'll see what I can do with that. Thanks!
 
gtrpastor- well tinny and distorted aren't good things...Thanks for your observations! I'm not sure what can be done...I can lower the bite mid of the horns but I like mids a little "bity" I'm pretty certain I didn't clip so I'm at a loss to understand the "distorted" comment.If someone else hears it please tell me.I'm not hearing that here.I'm not doubting you I just don't hear it...maybe I'm loosing my hearing :)
 
Wookie- Thanksyou and happy belated birthday man! I hope it was a good one for you.
 
james1213- I like being funked up sometimes.Thanks!
 

I love a good funking in the morning and it's 5:42AM as I type this.  WAAAAY too much fun Tim!  Love the guitar work and vocals.  Would like to hear the drums a little tighter with a bit more kick for such an energetic tune...but that's just me.
 
Very cool! 

Nice job Tim! Nice groove and a fun song.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

It sounds fun and funky to me.  I agree with SteveC on the horns a bit more "stab" might improve an already great song.  I don't think that you need any work on the vocals --- they sounded good to me.  If this is out of your comfort zone then you slid right in. 
 
Very nice indeed!!!

Hey Starise, I wouldn't worry too much about what I said. I noticed nobody else had a problem with the way this sounded except for me. So it might be my system or (more likely) just me. Also, I am much newer at this than you. 

Nice one, Tim!  This shows your versatility well.  Onward and upward!

as funky as a funky monkey from Funksville - nice one Tim

Starise
...Ok Steve...so come on over and we can work on this one ;)...I keep trying to collab with you on something...maybe one day? The horns are from Komplete. Pro session horns I think. It has the trumpets you mention in it...so I'll see what I can do with that. Thanks!
 
 

One of these days....    
 
I also use Komplete for horns, but just the out-of-the-box versions.   There should be trumpets and saxes with a quicker attack and less "tongue" up-front, if you know what I mean.  
 

Tony- Thank you and thanks for your suggestions! A good funking always helps doesn't it?
 
Dan- Thanks Dan!
 
FreddyJ- Thanks! Yes this is a definite thing I need to address in this track and I plan to get on it.
 
gtrpastor- I appreciate your obsetrvations Sean. I plan to address the comments. I wanted it from each perspective and I appreciated yours very much!
 
Lynn- Thank you Lynn...onward and upward I hope :)
 
Daryl- I had this in mind when I wrote it Daryl ;)....thanks man!
 
stevec- suggestions noted and taken to heart. Thanks! I can hopefully come back with this mix soon. I tend to get ahead of myself and have two or three things all cooking at once.