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Thanks for the suggestions. I will take them and use them when I learn more about composing later on. But in the meantime, here is something else. It is not a composition. It is a remix I did. I used it for a different videogame which would be Sonic.
 
This is a remix I did. It expresses Shadow the Hedgehog. It has a heavy metal instrument, a gothic woman singer, a gothic funk-like yell, a telepathic enchanting supernatural woman astronaut, and an enchanting male astronaut:
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xy25xns9idk
 
Here is the same song reversed (with the super sonic transformation sound effect) which conveys a very cool feel:
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ZWhyD-htA4
 
Here is another different remix which expresses something dark and gothic as well using this same singer and heavy metal:
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gj8p-n67TaU
 
Here is one more different remix:
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gpgnlADtQtQ
 

Here is another different remix for Dark Super Sonic. It has heavy booming bass combined with a harsh demonic sounding choir, an enchanting male astronaut, and an enchanting woman witch:
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7v2Z1xNxAg
 

just does not work with the clip.................
needs some powerful low end to build some drama
that theme may work perfectly somewhere else..... never scrap anything
 
I am doing a sound track to a movie right now and I see that (clip)score with about 5 tons of reverb
and some stereo tricks
and another track up front or in the background to take away from the repetition of your theme
see ya
 

ibediggin
just does not work with the clip.................
needs some powerful low end to build some drama
that theme may work perfectly somewhere else..... never scrap anything
 
I am doing a sound track to a movie right now and I see that (clip)score with about 5 tons of reverb
and some stereo tricks
and another track up front or in the background to take away from the repetition of your theme
see ya
 

Do you mean that the video clip I have chosen for my remix doesn't work out?  If that is the case, here is a much more fitting clip instead.  Since that demonic heavy bass remix did not work out for the battle scene between Nazo and Dark Super Sonic and only works for a demonic transformation (powering up theme), I have chosen to use this remix for a certain character undergoing a demonic transformation.  I know that this specific character (Trunks) is not demonic, but this remix goes with this scene anyway since it has a demonic otherworldly feel to it with the rushing sky and everything else:
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b8ravmSkCVs
 

Here is a new remix I made for Sonic Rush. It is dark and heavy. When you first hear the heavy metal instrument, that is not supposed to go with the light-hearted music in the background. Instead, it is supposed to go with the eerie transformation sound effect that occurs when Sonic and Blaze transform. I also added other things to this heavy metal as well which would be an otherworldly women and male choir, an otherworldly speaking woman, and a speaking male astronaut. This whole thing I have going here with the male astronaut, a woman, and otherworldly choirs seems to be a template that goes well with heavy bass, heavy metal, and epic rap-like instrumentals. It may be repetitious, but I do not have the necessary musical skills yet to make a fully perfected and flawless song. So I am just merely presenting this idea I have now.
 
In conclusion, I have also added the voice of Lil Wayne into this remix. I did this because his voice has a serious and yet a cool awesome dark tonality (mood) to it just like the mood of my remix. So this is why I put them together. This version of Lil Wayne combined with my remix would be a possessed evil version of Lil Wayne singing near the end:
 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XMG5YzgEmv0
 

sonic, you obviously are passionate and confident concerning the "songs" you have posted here. Have you taken the time to listen to some of the many fine songwriter/artists who post on this forum? Most all of them learn a great deal and are able to hone their talents as a result of appreciating the long hours of thought and planning that go into their fellow musicians' compositions.  If you would invest your efforts in developing your ideas a little farther, rather than posting just snippets of them, i'm sure you would get a better reception here.  It takes a long list of ingredients, and careful preparation to end up with a tasty dish....so if you want to be a chef.................just my two cents.........P.S. A wise man once said: "Nobody ever learns anything with their mouth open." ....... just a little advice from one who took his first music lesson in in 1957......................good luck with your tunes....Ron. 

I agree with what you say Ron. Also I suggest, Matt, that you would not make posts that include copy right infringement. It damages your posts.

Kakku can you show me the infringement I can then act.

Sonicfan had earlier made some posts about remixes he made with music from other artists and put them on Youtube one being Tpau.
Here is a post where is a link on his channel of somebody's song put on reverse:
http://forum.cakewalk.com...aspx?m=3178416&p=1
Here is one post where one of those links is gone it seems:
http://forum.cakewalk.com...aspx?m=3172137&p=1
I am not sure if the game videos are copy right protected but at least the game content is not his I believe. On Youtube Matt mvs is his channel I believe and there are many videos there.