http://www.reverbnation.com/q/5nmk1h
this has a glitch in sonar platinum
lead wont fade and the low hum at the end is coming from where?
 
 

......it is my understanding that all chiwawas are sadistic :) 
 
Really creative work ibediggin - a fusion of so many styles. I like it
The only thing I would change is the final stereo master. For my ears, there's too much stereo width and panning going on - it loses the power that the song undoubtedly has.
The ending is also very indulgent :) - I'm kidding I love the stuff that's going on towards the end there.

I found the bass and the lower distorted guitars and the low epic drums and the low distorted synths super thick and powerful, but it also overwhelms the top end of the mix - I wanted the vocal to stand out a lot more, because you have a pretty killer voice that really fits your composing well. 
 
Your filtering on those breakdown synth parts is really cool. I'd love to hear more snare in the outtro, a nice 2 / 4 SNAP! offsetting your very solid and funky bass.
 
I'd say your songwriting/composition skills are at a very high level. The indulgence is warranted.
 
cheers,
-Tom
 
 

I totally agree
went a little nuts
I am going to beef up the vocals and do a total remix
from  scratch
thank you
 

thank you all
for your comments
they are very help ful

really nice, man. I agree with Tom about the vocals. They're really strong and are worth hearing a little better. But love the grit in the whole show too. Keep it all a little messy.

my favorite guitar sound is a mix between a chainsaw and jackhammer
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