IT DOES invoke doors and floyd at the same time!
cool, doesn't sound too derivative, more inspired...
i think if you were to change your drum track, to something other than a straight 4/4 rock beat,
it would elevate.
think more world beat,
something mid eastern would totally set it off from the obvious...
even hand percussion, would be better than the somewhat boring rock kit sound...
it's too obvious,
too played out.
and the music you've got going on, demands something........... MORE.
just MHO, take it with grains of salt.
i'm a fan.