I like it, and I think the snare could be brought up louder, with less reverb. Have you thought of something a bit drier in the rhythm department? It's a matter of taste of course, but I think something more organic for drums might serve the lovely synth work up better.
I thought the second drum section worked much better in the song than the first one.
I'm curious to see where you take this. It's striking me as pretty European, which is a nice flavor these days.
cheers,
-Tom