I gave it a listen. I guess I have more tolerance for this kind of thing, as I thought it was pretty interesting all the way through. Nice work, and thanks for posting!
That being said, I think the bright sound design choices and upbeat rhythms seem at odds with the basic meandering (lack of) chord structure. What if you slowed it down and chose some darker sounding instruments? It might make for a slick horror/sci-fi environment track. Just a suggestion.