hi all,

Just finished a song.
Please listen and comment.
http://www.reverbnation.c...2763274-im-still-alive

Smedberg,
 
Nice song and arrangement, I like it.  Has a very 80's pop feel which is some of my favorite music.   Vocals are really good as is the backing track and mix.   The only suggestion I would make is maybe have the end fade out.  The classic pop fade out;)
 
Regards

I do like this, very very 80's, the drums sounded very small compared to the bass. absolutely stellar vocals!!!
thanks for the share . . .
-Tom

markno999
Smedberg,
 
Nice song and arrangement, I like it.  Has a very 80's pop feel which is some of my favorite music.   Vocals are really good as is the backing track and mix.   The only suggestion I would make is maybe have the end fade out.  The classic pop fade out;)
 
Regards

Probably should have stayed with that idea. Up until last week the song ended with fade to 4 minute mark...

I really like your song.  The mix sounds good to me.  I wonder if there is too much verb on the vocal.  On something but I can't put my finger on it.  The more I listen the more I like it.  That's a good sign.  I haven't heard your music before but I look forward to more.  I love my Volvo! 

Sounds OK here and does have that 80's vibe thanks for sharing.
 
@Warren now why does it not surprise me that you drive a Volvo I like mine too.

evadianepug
I really like your song.  The mix sounds good to me.  I wonder if there is too much verb on the vocal.  On something but I can't put my finger on it.  The more I listen the more I like it.  That's a good sign.  I haven't heard your music before but I look forward to more.  I love my Volvo! 

Thanks!
Volvos are great!

Wookiee
Sounds OK here and does have that 80's vibe thanks for sharing.
 

Thanks for listening!

Det här är ett jätte bra låt. Great work. I would buy this if I was into buying songs. The solo was very tasty also.

I guess I'm in the minority because I've never cared for 80's pop. Fortunately, I don't hear the 80's in this tune (the snare's much too sensible and the toms don't sound like oatmeal boxes in a cave). This is a very nice production. One suggestion: bring up the guitar solo to the same level as the lead vocal to avoid a dynamic dip.