Yet another direction for me.
This tune was inspired by my daughter, Stephanie. My wife, Donna, captured a photo of her in a moment of carefree bliss on the beach in Oregon the day before her wedding.
I hope you like it.
Original:
 http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13016571
 
Mix 5:
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13029478
New version 1/28/15

I like it Bob, I'm not sure it needs quite so much vibraslap. Definitely needs vocals and a story. Has a bit of a Raygay Buffalo Soldier vibe. Hope you and yours are doing well in 2015, Happy New Year. It has potential, but I don't know if I would slap the word Master on it just yet. 
 
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lol. Sonar does that, 'cause I export from the master bus.
Thanks for listening

Good start Bob. Needs a top line melody..lead guitar perhaps, and/or vocals.

What James said it is a good start and needs something to finish it off, thanks for sharing.

Good start Bob.

Yep, I agree with the others on this one. It's a good idea that seems to beg for a melody line on top. I think a simple harmonica may be nice, but what do I know?

fun stuff Robert!! keep on getting it!!

nice bouncy folksy tune - good job!

I'm glad you like it, Robby. I am inclined to agree on the vibraslap. That's going to get pared down to a few select hits.
Thanks, James. Yeah, it needs something, but I want to keep it very lean. Maybe some lead, especially after 2:00, where it rolls up out of the reggea.
Thanks, Wookie.
Thanks, Stan(if that is your real name)
Thanks, Clint. Simple for sure. I think it need to be more of a glaze than a thick layer. I've been kicking around some kalimba tracks, but harmonica? Hmmm. Might have to think about that.
Good to see you, Tom. DT has been an inspiration to me, so thanks twice.
Thanks, GB. Glad you enjoyed the bounce.