This is the final version although I could not mix it well IMO.
https://soundcloud.com/ma..al7/biting-winter-final
 
 
 
 
 
(Here is my latest. Mixing with cans. Made with Sonar X1 (hopefully I am able to upgrade soon). Comments welcome again:). Not ready yet (sounds familiar, I know and I really do not have many satisfyingly finished tunes at all)
 
https://soundcloud.com/madrigal7/biting-winter-2
 

Very nice throwback to another era. This would have fit nicely into my record collection from 1979. That's a compliment, btw. So nice to hear something so unapologetically unpretentious and upbeat for a change.
 
But what's up with that ending? I guess that's part of what's unfinished, eh?

Thank you for the comment Dave. That ending was a bit improvised stuff, I thought it would be nice to have a bit different ending, but I might change it. I am a bit retro guy I've been told.

Good job...the melody is just catchy as hell!...and I like the ending.

Thank you Clint for your comment. Such a compliment is very nice to hear.

This is nice feel good tune with a catchy melody, for me it could do with some subtle little touches just some odd drum fill's not big just the odd extra to act as musical clues to some of the changes.
 
Other than that it sounds like you have something good to progress with.
 
Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for the comment John. I admit the piece could use some drum fills and also perhaps some I am not sure what little things.

It's fun and light. Sounds good.

Thanks for the comment Jimmy.

This is the final version although I could not mix it well IMO. I added some drum fills. Comments most welcome:)
 
https://soundcloud.com/madrigal7/biting-winter-final