http://www.reverbnation.com/sadisticchiwawa/song/22894873-rains-came-new-mix

Very good. This song kind of touches the soul. Nice and huge reverb you got there.

thank you

Sounds like you have a good tune and the vox sounds OK but the mix is a bit messy to my furry ears.  In some places the Bass sits right over the vocal and the reverb on the vox is cool but it can washout the vox.
 
These are just the opinions of a furry Alien, your tune and if you like it then it is right.
 
Good tune though.

I will eventually do a remix
right now I am just learning to like it
 

Man, I REALLY like that song and arrangement!!  I particularly like your vocals.  Very epic and haunting over all.  Great, great job. 

thank you
very much

There is a great song in here. Your reverb is a mixing choice, yours to make, but your vocal is beyond good enough, I would bring it up front, louder, and cut that reverb time in half at least. I think it would bring the listener in for a connection even more.
 
I can tell by your arrangement that you have the songwriting gift. Great melody choices as well.
 
At the very end, it seems like the rains came and saturated your guitar amp. Ha ha sorry couldn't resist. Forgive me.
 
Paul Buchanan/Blue Nile - this is some outstanding territory you are in, I think. very well done . . .
 
cheers,
-Tom

Vox Reverb was VERRRRRY distracting.

THE ENDING WAS DONE WITH A RICK 4001
AND ACTUALLY WAS SUPPOSED TO GIVE A SOUND OF BRAIN WAVES OVERLOADING
THE SONG IS ABOUT ALZHEIMERS
I LOVE THE ECHOS
AND I AM GOING TO TAKE THE ADVICE OF YOU ALL
AND TWEEK IT DOWN A LITTLE
BUT FOR NOW I JUST NEED TO STEP AWAY FROM IT
A WHILE