here is a new mix i made hope you like it
 
song title AVEC TOI
http://www.soundclick.com...ngid=13040473&q=hi
 
cheer
martin

It sounds quite raw here, quite open, I think the vocal could do with some additional support in the form of harmonies or other backing vocal, but as I do not do signing I probably not best placed to speak about that.
 
Thanks for sharing.

ok i take note thx for listning
 
martin

It might not hurt to double track the vocal.  Just a thought.  Like John (Wookie) said, some harmonies could help. Interesting tune but a bit muddy through my phones.  Nice start on an interesting song.  

thx dude advices are welcome
 
martin

Very nice song. I think the vocals and bass could be a bit louder.

good kakku i will listen more closely
 
thx dude

Like the arpeggiated electric guitar riff, and the acoustic guitar behind it, good combo!
 
Vocals up please! And, if you are eq'ing the bass, you might try adding a bump up around 500-600 hz, to help it cut through with some treble fingery bits.  Did you roll off your guitars below say 200 hz? it might lessen a little mud down yonder.
 
great laid-back feel to the tune, very nice!
 
cheers,
-Tom

thx Tom for your compliments & advices i take notes of all what you said thx again
 
martin

I think his vox sound good i this they just too far away try to make them more dry. easy on the reverb