Newest track online. I used Sonar X1. Comments welcome. I used headphones while mixing because my monitors are atm unavailable.
 
https://soundcloud.com/madrigal7/peshga

Gave me an elevator vibe with all of the synths and pads and voice patches. It cries out for more variety. 

Thanks for the comment. I will make changes to the chorus and perhaps to the verse also.

It has a very new age vibe sort of thing that would sit well over/under a documentary or scenic video.
 
Thanks for sharing 

Thanks for your comment John. The new age vibe is unintentional, but sounds like a nice compliment:)

It is a compliment coming from Wookie.
 
I liked it. The downside to mixing in cans, as I'm sure you're aware, is it's so hard to gauge the low end of the spectrum. This one could use a little more beef down there, mostly in the 90-150Hz range I'm guessing. A stronger, better-defined kick could be all it needs.

Thanks for the comment Dave. I have noticed it is difficult to mix with cans. I will try to fix things.

Nice one kakku.  I might suggest possibly backing off a little on the background pads, and making them sound a bit more "airy", rather than so dominant.  If you're going to add more bottom end as bitflipper suggested (and I agree), maybe add it to the drums, rather than the synths.

Thanks for the comment Walt. I must admit I don't know how to make the pads air like but I will try to make some changes to the whole product when I return from my current 'there is not a single working computer here' h**l.

Another cool song. When it first started I thought it sounded like an old song by The Cars. I'll tell you, with some lyrics you could have some pretty cool retro sounding pop songs. I mean all of that as a compliment.