Hi J Mas
I didn't catch this first time round but this mix sounds great - plenty of energy. Song's nice and quirky too.
Daryl

John, this mix sounds better to me. Vocals are more upfront and clearer. the important thing, though is that this is just a terrific song. Reminds me a little of early XTC. Well done

well...its much better (Vox wise) but I'd still come up a bit more as I still feel the vox site behind the guitars and kit in the mix..but yes you are heading in the right direction...dont be shy on the vox..you got a great voice so push it man...push it!!

thepogue
well...its much better (Vox wise) but I'd still come up a bit more as I still feel the vox site behind the guitars and kit in the mix..but yes you are heading in the right direction...dont be shy on the vox..you got a great voice so push it man...push it!!

Thanks! I'll listen to it in more places. I mix at low volumes. When I have the fader low I hear the vocal, snare and bass perfectly. I think my fear is, if I bring up the vox it may get in the way of the ever growing aggressiveness of the guitars. The guitars are the key to the buildup of energy. It's all taste but I respect what you're saying. That's why mixing is art.

daryl1968
Hi J Mas
I didn't catch this first time round but this mix sounds great - plenty of energy. Song's nice and quirky too.
Daryl

Thanks Daryl.  I think quirky is a good description. 
It certainly explains some of my other work.  If you checkout some of my tunes at https://soundcloud.com/jmasno5  you'll hear songs about a grade school kid in love with his teacher, a guy who was drugged and robbed on a date, the resistance to give in to mental anguish, and co-workers who despise a boss who is in place because of nepotism. 

mcourter
John, this mix sounds better to me. Vocals are more upfront and clearer. the important thing, though is that this is just a terrific song. Reminds me a little of early XTC. Well done

Thanks M!  I like XTC a lot.  I think things just come out when we write.

Very nice job. Good singing and playing too.

kakku
Very nice job. Good singing and playing too.

Thank you.

The original and Remix threads have been merged.

Radio ready pop tune.  70s type groove. Great vocal work.  I think the mix is spot on.
I don't know if I caught your instrumentation, but it sounds great.
 
John B.