Just had a listen to the remix - definitely better.   The lead vocal is crisper and more present while the overall mix is still nice and wide.   I think for a "pop" mix the vocal could probably sit just a little higher in the mix, but with that said I can hear everything you're singing.   Works for me. 
 

Thanks for listening John B and Steve!

Yes, this does sound far better than the 1st submitted mix. I think the vox are sitting pretty well. Although, you could even raise them just a little if you felt the need to do so.
 
Really good song :)

jmasno5

I mix at low volumes.

That's working for you, because listening at low volume I can pick out drums, bass and guitars nicely and the vocals are riding over the top well. Good song too!