I enjoyed the track, if your looking for suggestions I love drums so maybe some tom fills higher up in the mix? Is that you singing in ther background??? -Shawn

@thegaltieribrothers: thank you for your very nice comment.
@Shawn: thanks for the comment. I agree, there should be more drums in it. It is not anybody's voice in the background. Instead there is a flute instrument there, but it should probably be louder.

Nice melody on this one Kakku. Mix turned out well.
 
Regards,
Dan

Very nice, very radio friendly.  Like the others here I think it deserves some lyrics, because this is a very good song.

Thank you guys for your very nice comments.

This is lovely. Also takes me back to the classic 80's synth legends. Agree with other with regards to having some vocal's on top and Shawn is right about having some movement on the drums.
Mixed very well. nicely done. :)

Thank you Gus for your nice comment. I do not know any singers who could sing this. Also I think that writing lyrics is difficult.

Not much to add to the above - musically, a little more punch and variation in the drums is about all it needs IMO.   Really nice synth pop!  You definitely have a good ear for the genre.

Thank you Steve. I try to add some more drum stuff, making some other changes as well.

Listened to this a couple of days ago but my ears were tired and it sound very much like something I had heard before that I decided I should come back and listen later.
 
Yes it has that very 80's synth vibe and as noted above it needs some development just to add some edge.
 
Thanks for sharing.