Very pleasant. I agree vocals would add much, in lieu of that the development and variations would give it a bit of build.

Thanks for the comments guys. John, if it sounds very familiar then it is bad news. If possible can you say if it was the verse or chorus that sounds familiar and also I would like to hear the name of the song it resembles if you remember it. Of course a song can sound a bit familiar but if it sounds too much familiar it can be tossed into the closest river.

I think it is as much the chord progression which I am hearing and unfortunately many songs have very similar chord progressions.  This is why it needs a more developed melody line or some other ear candy to centre the ears on.  If my furry brain can put a name to the tune then I will come back to you other than just remember in western notation there are only thirteen notes always a good excuse.

very nice 

Thanks for the comments guys. I have tried to finish the tune but it is not easy to me. I will probably put out the new version tomorrow and leave it at that development stage until some day I know what to do with it.

I especially liked the arpeggios around the 3:00 mark. Moves along nicely kakku...you made a decent mix even without monitors. I liked the idea of adding a few drum fills and maybe vox in places.. Nice track!

Thanks for the comment Tim. I believe the arps you mention is the nice Z3ta+. The drums I often don't do well enough. It is the same old drum loop I always use.

Now I have put online a newer, hopefully better version of Malibu Mae(silly name, but I never come up with good ones for some reason). Comments still welcome and appreciated. Still not ready, but I will probably finish it at some later time. There is 2 choruses again and I would like hear which is better chorus.
 
https://soundcloud.com/madrigal7/malibu-mae-2

sounds great

i like it the sounds are good & also good ambience..music
 
 
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