Been a productive couple of weeks here... got another new song out today.  This one's called Radium, and it's in the style of groove/funk electronica.  I hope you enjoy it!
 
https://soundcloud.com/arcanor/radium
 
 

Great! Love the spoken word stuff ripped from some ephemeral '50's film. All of your other elements blend really well - fizzy synth bass, the keys, the pads, the guitar . . .
 
In the middle, you have a second section with a synth lead. At the end of the line, you cut the synth lead off pretty abruptly to get to the next spoken word snippet. Around 1:29. Have you thought about fading the synth away instead?
 
The only other thing maybe you could do to increase  dynamics is to add a breakdown section, if I remember, it's pretty much the same rhythm and volume all the way through.
 
Suh-weet! Keep bringing it on . . .
 
-Tom

Thanks for the listen and comments Tom.
 
I will take another listen to that synth lead at 1:29, thanks for the catch!
 
As for a breakdown section, I was hoping the guitar lead would work in that regard, where it's only drums, bass, and guitar (all synths/keys drop out).  I guess I failed to pull that off? ;)

Sounds OK here Walt what are you using here?
 
Thanks for sharing.

Thanks John.  Here's the track listing:
 
Radium - track listing
1. Arturia Spark - 80s Studio Drums
2. Z3TA+2 - Bass Shape 01 FS
3. rgcAudio Square I - A000 PolyMod
4. Battery 4 - 909 Multiple Kit
5. SI-String Section
6. Rapture - Age of Ultron
7. Rapture - Moog Pedal Lead
8. precision bass - Guitar Rig 5 - Precise Bottom
9. stratocaster guitar - Guitar Rig 5 - Stevie's Lead - MC
10. sliced and diced voiceover track from an old public domain video
 
As you can see, I used mostly Cakewalk stuff for this song.

Yes, your guitar section is a good go at a changeup, but I was thinking about a more drastic breakdown, maybe pull it down to just minimal drums, then build it back up. Maybe I am suggesting a cliche .. . ?
 
When I offer arrangement comments like that, I hope I am showing also my admiration for the tune and your accomplishments. I realize full well that arrangement and structure choices are indeed very personal musical decisions, and yours work pretty darn well in my opinion. 
 
-Tom
 
 

Thanks Walt and an interesting combination too.

Nice atmospheric track Walt, Thomas Dolby-esque. I like that Moog Pedal lead patch, I've used it a lot in the past . The lead guitar section hits just right for me, it kind of jolts you out of a dreamlike state. Bass is cool, really moves along.

emeraldsoul
Yes, your guitar section is a good go at a changeup, but I was thinking about a more drastic breakdown, maybe pull it down to just minimal drums, then build it back up. Maybe I am suggesting a cliche .. . ?
 
When I offer arrangement comments like that, I hope I am showing also my admiration for the tune and your accomplishments. I realize full well that arrangement and structure choices are indeed very personal musical decisions, and yours work pretty darn well in my opinion. 
 
-Tom

Thanks Tom.  We seem to have similar backgrounds and tastes.  I do appreciate your thoughts.  Keep 'em comin'. ;)
 
I may yet do something like what you suggest in a "further-broken-down" section, in a remix version.

jamesg1213
Nice atmospheric track Walt, Thomas Dolby-esque. I like that Moog Pedal lead patch, I've used it a lot in the past . The lead guitar section hits just right for me, it kind of jolts you out of a dreamlike state. Bass is cool, really moves along.

Thanks James!  I'm a big fan of your work too.  Let me know if you're ever looking for a new collaborator. :)