Hey Lynn, this is great stuff! I like the meter and the feel. Guitars and organ are great. Drums are nice and prominent. The only thing I'd suggest is on the vocals. I know you've processed them heavily for the feel of the Song, but they're so muddy they blend with the guitars. I'd suggest a little EQ on them to take out the lower kids to let them punch through a rad more.

Just my opinion! No worries if you disagree!

I'm not professionally qualified to comment on the use of the technology but as a listener to all kinds of music I thought that the backing was a little loud for the vocals, just a tad but enough to make me strain a little to hear them, and that the rhythm appeared to my ears to be slightly jerky (sorry don't know the technical term) maybe a quarter or an eighth beat out, but as I said I am not qualified to judge so I am only saying as I hear. 

excellent Lynn - really cool song mate. It has a vintage vibe but enough crunch and edge to sound up to date.
I'm listening on crappy speakers and will listen again in the studio later. 

This was very good. Great guitarwork and singing. Mix sounded balanced.
kakku

Nice work Lynn, I would have liked the vocals more up front, and yes, a bit louder. I particularly liked the rhythm, it suited the feel of the song.

Great song Lynn!  Nice effects.  I've got to get into that.  Mixing is like art to me.  No right or wrong.  I like your artwork.

Very cool number Lynn.  You really have a wide separation on this and I like it.  In the very beginning the kick drum really work me up and got my attention --  kicked my heart rate up to about 180.  Good performance and production -- another nice one!!!

man this was a very cool tune!! I think the mix works will for the classic rock feel it has......love the 3:30 part where she tones down...really great tune.
 
If you ever want to hear an alt re-mix just email me....I'd like to give it a whirl.
 
really cool tune!

I've been out all day, and I just got back to this.  I really appreciate your comments and have already incorporated many of your suggestions just moments ago.  I raised the vocals and the guitar solo, boosted the lows a tad, and scooped the mids slightly.  I realize that the 5/4 time signature is not the norm for this genre, but I hope that it swings regardless.  The link is here: http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?q=hi&songID=12968378
 
Thanks, personally, to Tim, Warren, Herb, Robert, Reece, Chris, Daryl, Antti, Wayne, John, Freddy, and Tom.  I'm able to make changes to this mix so quickly that it's almost like interactive mixing with all of you.  If there's anything else I can do, I ready to try.
 
 

Steve Miller :-) Good job on this one Lynn, it's right in your wheelhouse.