Randy, you made me cry. Good job. I wish I'd written that song.

Wow Dave, thanks very much...a great compliment knowing what a good songwriter you are!
Thanks again,
Randy

love it!
 
she will have to love this! the melody is beautiful and most importantly it really means something.
 
I feel like I shouldnt like those drums but I love how dry and punchy they are!
 
Cian

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love it!
 
she will have to love this! the melody is beautiful and most importantly it really means something.
 
I feel like I shouldnt like those drums but I love how dry and punchy they are!
 
Cian

Thanks very much Cian...yeah the drums, you're not the only one that has commented they're a little out of place...I started out with just a ballad beat but it felt kinda bland...or too serious ...or something.
That said, I will probably try to thin them out a little more in places.
Thanks again Cian,
Randy

Just had a listen...   the overall mix could use a little polish/punch, but I think what you'd done is very good!   I like the harmonies. 
 

Thanks very much Steve!

Randy - this is an excellent song!  she will absolutely love it! If not then she doesn't deserve you! j/k!
 
mix wise it could use some work, but regardless I'm sure she'll love it as is!

Thanks very much Beagle!
I've had a couple of PMs suggesting some different things that I plan on working on (ie the guitar being klunky and the drums being too busy) and I'll post a new link when finished.
Thanks again everyone!
Randy

Hi Randy,
 
What a nice song. I like your voice on this a lot. I hope to hear it when you get it mixed the way you want!!

Wow thanks Tim, I've never really considered myself as a singer ("just the drummer" that got stuck with the harmonies that no one else wanted) 
Thanks again my friend,
Randy