Here is a collaboration between myself and Larry Hansen. 
 
https://soundcloud.com/st...larry-hansen-tim-smith
 
 

Thought I would have a listen as I deleted the duplicate.
 
Larry does have such a wonderful touch, is that your keys etc in support Tim?
 
This sounds very nice here you should both take a bow.
 

Thanks Wookie! ....Larry played a main guitar part and I played the rest. Sorry about the duplicate post...not sure what happened.

Beautifully done, serene piece.  Made me very comfortable.

Starise
Thanks Wookie! ....Larry played a main guitar part and I played the rest. Sorry about the duplicate post...not sure what happened.

Duplicates happen that is part of what us host's are here for contrary to what some may think. 
 
As I said re your and Larry's tune you should both take a bow it is a very enjoyable tune and the mix translates well here.

Very nice, relaxing kind of song. Very minor criticism is that the water sound ends a bit abruptly.

Very nice both of you! The only mix suggestion I would have is that all of the instruments are sort of on top of each other, so it is difficult to hear a lot of what's going on behind the guitar.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

nice blending in the mix....
 
the louder you listen to this, the better the mix works.
 
it's a smooth sounding eq overall,
sometimes sounds a bit dull,
but adding high end could make it a bit shrill......
tough call, exactly where it works the best,
but in this version, it is very pleasing and easy to listen to.
 
especially loud.
LOL
 
 
if you keep working the mix,
try mixing it at a real low volume,
just to see what pops out and what disappears.
make some very small adjustments, and that should do it.
nice tune.

Very nice.  The tones are good and natural sounding.  Things are a bit on top of each other as stated earlier but it's OK with me.  I love the purity of it all.  I really like the laid back energy.  Cruzin'...

Tim - you've really gotten quite good at mixing.  this one is no exception.
 
love that acoustic sound!  the pads, keys, strings - other keyboard parts are quite cool in this.
 
I'd like to have heard some more variety in the chords, tho.