But it's pretty good :-)
 
http://www.reverbnation.com/rockinrobby/song/10889463-closer-to-fine-1st-remix
 
I did everything? 
 
We go to the doctor, we go to the workout...
 
Perhaps we need to take life less seriously?
 
There's more than one answer pointing me in a crocked line? 
 
Heywood...

the man with a 1000 names...can I assume you've been booted 999 times?
 

 
 

Yo, Robbbaaaaaaay!!!
 
Excellent work on this very cool stylized cover!
 
Warm acoustic guitars, dynamite vocal performances and lush harmonies, a very nice strings break and I'm pretty sure I'm hearing some banjo or mando fills in there to boot!
 
Super job, bro, your vocals are always top-notch and very emotive, and you always put a lot of fine detail work into your stuff.
 
Have a good one, brother!
Bob

Sounds good, Robby.  I thought the username seemed as though it could be "Ya-Blow-Me".  I should have known.

Jablowmi19
I did everything? 

If you don't know how do we?

Robbie, 
Your song is really good.  Your profile name of Heywood Jablowmi 19 is really too far out there for me. 
Why you want to degrade yourself so much when you have such great talent - I just don't get it.
 
Anyway, I wish you would consider upgrading your name so that it is in line with the TOS and then post all the songs you want.  I think your artistry is worth it. 
 
Rimshot
 

Well done music.   Acoustic guitars and vocals sounds good.

It's a great acoustic tune, all other comments aside? Everyone should do less to seek their source, you'd all be closer to fine ;-) He who judges least judges best... The older I get, the more accepting I try to be of others. I'm happy to focus more on the music, and less on the performer (unless they are a self avowed communist) 
 
"I went to the doctor, and I went to the mountains, I looked to the children and I drank from the fountain
There's more than one answer, pointing me in a crooked line... And the less I seek my source for some definitive, the closer I am to fine "yeah"
 
I hope we all live long enough to gain wisdom.
(a quote from me)
 
H-
 
p.s., working on an acoustic tune for a few months now. It's a gospel song? I hope you won't judge me on it... ;-) (I've read the book buddy. Several times... Old and New. It's funny how that plank in someone's eye doesn't block out the splinter in mine?)
 
And I went in seeking clarity.
 
p.p.s, My name is Frances, but if any of you call me that, ***********! "Lighten up Frances..." Lighten up. It almost killed Sergeant Hulka? I want to be your big toe. Or as Homer Simpson would say, your big DOH!
 
Lighten up Frances? Lighten up... You'll be closer to fine ;-)

same as it ever was......

Robbie, why do you post here? There's nothing wrong with it....perfect mix...great talent. Great lyrics. You don't leave me anything else to say :)