Hey there Mark, not my favorite from you sir. The chords, the vocals, the mix? There's room for work, but you worked on it and posted it, so good job on the effort.  And I enjoy any tune with a B3 in the mix.                                                                           

Jab, I'm sorry you didn't care for it, but I appreciate the fact that you took the time to listen and comment.

Good to see you back here Mark, most everything that needs to be said has been said so I will not reiterate, the one thing that really stood out to me is that apart from a couple of little breaks it sounded very narrow.  Backing vox was very good.
 
Thanks for sharing.

We need to support those who support others ;-) We're all swimming in this pool and trying to swim better. I just want to get this piano off my back?