I think the 3rd demonic detention should have been discussed in determining the differential despairities between the dialog and the dogmatic approach of this piece...
 
you know what I mean?
 
 

 
oh BTW cool tune! ;)

The composition and discussion of Fugue is above my pay grade!  but I do like this - I like it a LOT better than the last song I listened from you, Ben.  not to say your other song didn't have merit of it's own accord, it just wasn't my cuppa tea, I suppose.
 
this one is quite interesting!

Thanks for all the positive feedback and for listening guys. 
 
Ben

I liked it.  I would suggest that where your voices intersect, that when there is discord, perhaps editing so that the collision of notes are harmonic to the key and not random hits.  It is one thing to write for 4 voices but another to then clean up the work so that musically it all fits technically (or not).  
If you want the collisions, then please disregard.  If you don't know they are happening, then maybe take another look at the composition.  If you have tried to make the whole piece harmonious, then there may be some work still needed.
 
Rimshot

Rimshot
I liked it.  I would suggest that where your voices intersect, that when there is discord, perhaps editing so that the collision of notes are harmonic to the key and not random hits.  It is one thing to write for 4 voices but another to then clean up the work so that musically it all fits technically (or not).  
If you want the collisions, then please disregard.  If you don't know they are happening, then maybe take another look at the composition.  If you have tried to make the whole piece harmonious, then there may be some work still needed.
 
Rimshot

Thanks for listening Jimmy...as is always the case with me, it's somewhere in the middle re: discord.  I have a basic idea of what needs to go where, then let it go where it needs to go.  I know this is going to get me into trouble because "the rules" if I try and do this seriously then I am going to have to sit down and work out the issues, as it is the composition took an evening and expressed some emotion.
 
Cheers Ben