A lot of humming going on in the background on this song. I like the song though. Maybe a bit of reverb would be nice, but not a lot. A story about an old cabin can go a long way. I remember an old cabin from my old days out in California. It was a really nice place to go for Labor Day and several people would meet up there and we partied pretty good back then. Then one year a bunch of bikers went there and ruined the place and that was the end for many people. Glad to hear your cabin is still enjoying your visits.
Peace and Blessings, John