Wookiee
You might find you get some more input if you stuck those talented ears on a few of our efforts
I actually have listened to quite a few of the songs here, but never made any comments because I hadn't posted anything. It didn't seem right to comment without exposing myself first

I'll probably continue to spend more time lurking than participating, but it is fun to visit on occasion and just go through the songs to find out how people are using SONAR, and sometimes I do want to comment and now I feel I can do so.
There's a procedure I follow on my Sound, Studio, and Stage forum where I post a mix on YouTube but with an unlisted URL. I put that in the forum, and ask for comments from what I call the "Sound, Studio, and Stage Production Squad." There are people with really great ears and they make excellent suggestions. I then take those into account, do a final version, and post it a week or so later. I find their feedback incredibly helpful. It might be interesting to try that "two-step" approach here.
The main reason I posted my songs was so that if any one had questions about what mixing or mastering techniques/instruments/etc. were used, I could maybe give some ideas people would find useful. Or not

Somebody already asked an audio-for-video question based on the songs in the SONAR forum.