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2014/10/19 06:49:44
biodiode
After focusing for a long time on composing music for my choir I finally got my head back in to writing gold old electronic tunes. Enjoy listening:-
https://soundcloud.com/biodiode/strangers-in-the-dreamworld
 
2014/10/19 08:23:32
Wookiee
Generally it sound quite good here though the lead piano is a bit to ephemeral and could do with comeing up a tad, for me, and the to the floor beat seems to lack a little bottom end weight.  This is just the opinions of a furry alien it is your tune and yours to do as you wish.
 
Thanks for sharing.
2014/10/20 02:34:20
RussjWhite
Yes does sound very well produced. The only thing that bugs me is the artificial drum sounds. Nice tune.
 
Thanks for posting.
2014/10/20 12:47:56
Starise
I left a comment on SC. Nice ambient combination with a beat and it all fits very well!
2014/10/20 12:59:53
biodiode
Thank you for the feedback. It is appreciated and helps to see if one is heading in the right general direction in the production process.
 
Wookie - I was on the fence about the piano myself and may well revisit this over the next few days as I have some time away from the wonderful called 'work'.
 
gusrogers - By artificial drums I take it that you mean the electronic tone of them. One of the tracks I am working on may be more up your street although the acoustic drums are filtered slightly.
 
Starise - Thanks for leaving a comment on SC :)
2014/10/20 18:00:11
polarbear
I actually agree with Gus. Really like it except that drum tone. Nothing wrong with an electronic drum kit, but that kick sounds too weak for the rest of the track. It should be driving the song forward.
 
Great work.
2014/10/20 19:51:55
dcumpian
The problem with the drums isn't just the tone, it's that they don't sound like they are part of the mix. They have a completely different ambiance than everything else in the mix. Otherwise, it's a really well done piece.
 
Regards,
Dan
2014/10/20 20:10:40
MarkusClinus
Ok - first of all - not my kind of music - this kind of stuff always sounds like movie soundtrack to me. But, with that said - this is a really nice clear mix good dimension. The instruments are well played - I enjoyed listening to this.
2014/10/21 12:37:42
biodiode
Ah thanks for providing more information about the kick drum, I will see what I can do over the next few days. Incidentally this was mixed using Softube Console 1, which to my ears seems to apply a nice character to the sound.
2014/10/22 13:49:30
MarkusClinus
Nice production. Not my kind of thing - reminds me of a movie - with the movie missing - a good soundtrack.
 
Well-done - good mix - good playing.
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