This is one of my old tunes. I used some other than my usual song structure. Tell me if you can what it is:D... Comments welcome.
kakku
 
https://soundcloud.com/madrigal7/meta-pop

kakku, this is beautiful - so peaceful - nice twist and turns. I think this is well-written and the instruments are well played. Well done.

Thank you for your nice comment Mark.
kakku

Hi Kakku,
 
You do wonderful synth work. Older tune huh? It has a distinct 80's feel to it which I like. It isn't coming across as loud as some of the pop tunes I've heard in this genre...that's probably the only thing I would change personally. I might make the bass a little more powerful and put the whole mix up a little louder. It was still plenty loud when I pulled up my volume control though, but I had to take it up some.

Thank you starise for your nice comment. Since I have had some trouble writing new better stuff I just sent the tune without thinking if the mix was ok. I will return to it some day though. Now I'm trying hard to make some new stuff. I made today already one tune but it's not too good... Yesterday same thing, made something that needs a better chorus. I liked the chorus on Metapop.
kakku