Hello all,
 I've had a bit of a break from here and from writing. Working on other things for the past month or so.
Back to writing again, this tune was thanks to the 8 note melody given to me by my lovely wife, so I've expanded it and based the whole piece on those 8 notes.  The bass drum a bit too high and busy in the mix. so that's something for me for fix.
Look forward to all of your views and ideas on how to improve it. As well as checking out your music.
All the very best,
   Gus 
 
https://soundcloud.com/russ-white/stars
 

I enjoyed this a lot. Beautiful melody and some great production. The change at 2.48 took me by surprise too. (In a good way!)

This sounded very good especially considering you based the song on an 8 notes melody. It was at times a bit confusing when there was more stuff happening at the same time. I liked the melody and it was skillfully arranged.
kakku

Cool song, great arrangement and mix.  I dig the etherreal feel.  The name really fits!

Nice piece Russ I enjoyed listening (x2)
 
Thanks for sharing

Very nice Russ! There is a dramatic feel to the melody that is begging for orchestra and timpani, lol.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

kakku
This sounded very good especially considering you based the song on an 8 notes melody. It was at times a bit confusing when there was more stuff happening at the same time. I liked the melody and it was skillfully arranged.
kakku

Thanks,
  I've since updated and highlighted the leads parts near the end. I now think it's a finished piece. Although I'm half tempted to see if I can push these 8 notes even further.
cheers.
Gus

Masterofnone
I enjoyed this a lot. Beautiful melody and some great production. The change at 2.48 took me by surprise too. (In a good way!)

Thanks for you comments. I've updated the piece from 2:48 to the end. I think it's much clearer now. 
I've still got it :) lol

kzmaier
Cool song, great arrangement and mix.  I dig the etherreal feel.  The name really fits!

yup, floaty twinkly Stars. Once there is a theme, it truly helps to develop ideas.
Thanks for listening. :)

 

Wookiee
Nice piece Russ I enjoyed listening (x2)
 
Thanks for sharing

:) wow I got an encore! thanks again Wook my man.