Wookiee
It sounds nice here, it is not so much your guitar playing that I was wondering about more the three armed drummer .  
 
The mix translates very well here, thanks for sharing.

Don't all drummers in Akahaocwora have three arms? Seriously, I think your hearing more drummer than is there. Lots of percussion in this as well, though I'll freely admit that there may be some extra ride hits that I forgot to edit out when I was finishing up the drum tracks. Thanks for the listen!
 
Regards,
Dan

Really well done song Dan......superb mix/production that I truly appreciated on h-phones. I enjoyed it very much.....thanks for sharing.

Mesh
Really well done song Dan......superb mix/production that I truly appreciated on h-phones. I enjoyed it very much.....thanks for sharing.

Thanks Mesh!
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Excellent. The song has a very relaxed, airy feel, which is always nice. Very good melodies. Well played instruments also. The mix sounds good on my system. If I have to find a fault, maybe a bit long for some people, but  length is fine for me.
kakku

I like it. I wouldn't worry about the guitar. I think it sounds great. Nice work!!!

kakku
Excellent. The song has a very relaxed, airy feel, which is always nice. Very good melodies. Well played instruments also. The mix sounds good on my system. If I have to find a fault, maybe a bit long for some people, but  length is fine for me.
kakku

Thanks for listening and your comments Kakku!
 
Regards,
Dan

Guitarpima
I like it. I wouldn't worry about the guitar. I think it sounds great. Nice work!!!

Thanks a bunch Robert!
 
Regards,
Dan

It's very pleasing background/mood music. I'm just listening to it on a 1-inch iHome speaker attached to my laptop and it sounds pretty good on that.

jsaras
It's very pleasing background/mood music. I'm just listening to it on a 1-inch iHome speaker attached to my laptop and it sounds pretty good on that.

Thanks Jonas! Was hoping a for little more than background music, but if it sounds good, I'll take it.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

i like it!
 
i don't think it needs anything changed to the guitar approach...
 
and rather than dwelling on what you think you can't pull off anymore,
think instead about 'deconstructing' the guitar you hear in your head, to the most basic melody and harmony you can nail, and THAT is your strength.
 
i don't think any part of would fall under 'jazz' category...
it's really a nice pop piece, if anything.....
 
good mix, it would be really easy to place a vocal over this, in my head, i hear a female vocal, like a joss stone