Thanks Wook! 
 
Yeah I think Starise had some great advice. And i think I have someone else that's going to help me work on it as well. 

The post saying the mix seems to lack energy explains what I hear.  Lotsa good stuff there but somehow it seems like there's no "punch?".  I have no suggestion for you except if there is a lot of compression that could be the problem.  I only know that from reading thousands of posts on here.  However, that could be wrong.  Anyway, good song.

Thanks for listening and the good words Warren. 
 
I'm going to work on it a little more, and I think I'll have a little help with it. I'll put it back up when it's done and see if we got it.