I am the one

2014/09/28 21:11:44

munmun

Hi. A slightly different genre. Musical. Bashing welcome in terms of composition and mix.

https://soundcloud.com/sunny-zaman1/i-am-the-one

2014/09/29 19:00:48

dcumpian

You've got a good song here, but the recording of the accompanying instruments (drums and strings) really could use some rework. I'd also add additional backing vocals to bring more energy to the later choruses (chorii?).

Regards,
Dan

2014/09/30 00:26:37

Guitarpima

Agreed. This could be a real gem with some extra TLC. I really love the song!

Well done!

2014/10/02 15:20:44

stevec

Nice song!

I agree about the drums needing some work - the brushes make it a bit indistinct IMO. And after the bridge I can hear a more realistic orchestral approach building up and really raising the outro.

2014/10/03 05:57:26

jamesg1213

Long time no hear Sunny! This is quite nice, it builds well from the sparse intro. Thematically and melodically it's a little too close to Bridge Over Troubled Water for me. Nicely done though.

2014/10/03 09:37:28

Starise

Nice song Sunny . Great lyrics!

2014/10/05 10:45:19

Wookiee

All the advice above is sound, (no pun) thanks for sharing, your voice is very good.

2014/10/10 23:54:04

evadianepug

A very nice tune. I didn't like the beginning mix but it seemed to grow on me as more instruments came in. I really like bridge. It's good work. Maybe some mix issues but a good song.

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