Tom, thanks for listening and taking the time to reply.  I wasn't aware how familiar I am to Roxette until I looked them up on Youtube.  Thanks for the compliment.

Cool Lynn I like the groove , the who song sounds tight , cool ! Good mix , vocals sounded spot on too . You always record some great songs , wish I had your talent !

definitely not too grim...

Electro and The Metal One, welcome to the forum and thanks for taking the time to listen and comment.  Hope to hear more from you.

great song.. I liked how the rhythm grooves and arrangement. sounds good

Makke, thank you, as always, for taking the time to listen and comment.

Finally getting to this one...   The mix sounds very good here, nice overall balance and really good clarity.   I agree with a few above who though that the subject matter was darker than the actual music itself, but that's a subjective thing for sure.     Nice job on this one, Lynn!
 

Thank you, Steve, for your kind words.  When I started writing this song, I had no idea which direction it was going until the last bridge and chorus.  I let the major chord prevail in the verse because I wanted the end to sneak up on the listener.  That's my story, and I'm sticking to it.

My former band wife was, uh...never mind.  Live and learn.  

very new wavish feeling for me...lots and lots of great stuff going on....good work.
 
I could see this being a hit in the clubs I used to frequent in the early 80's....