You are a blue man sir. I wish I was a blew man...

Other than the abrupt ending, this is a terrific song.  Maybe, pay a little more attention to the quick fade out, and you've got another winner on your hands.  Nice job, Freddy.

I had to run by this one again.
Smokin'.
I'm with Lynn. Let that outro ride a bit, and you've got a home run here.

 
 
Robbie:  After my last medical treatment I was certainly black and blue -- ouch!
 
Hi Lynn:  I think that sometimes when you get done with a number you should just ignore it for a few days and then come back and listen to it.  After reading your comments I went back and listened again and doggone if it was closed out in a bit of a hurry -- wasn't it?  Thanks Lynn, I appreciate the comments and the insight!!
 
Hey Robert:  Thanks for the kind comments and taking time to listen.  Now that I have re-listened to this number, it does seem that I was in a bit of a hurry to close out the end.  Thanks for the heads-up. 
 

nice  groove with strong, rough guitar sound.. some live vibe on record .. good job

Thanks Makke!  I appreciate the comments.

How bout those vocals?  They've come a long way.  Sounds like it could be on Halsted St.  If you haven't been there put it on your bucket list.  YOU would love it.

Ooops, I almost missed this one.  Thanks for the kind words pal. I bet I would love Halsted St.  Unfortunately, until my treatments are over I won't be traveling for a while.
Thanks again.

Worked for me

Thank you John.  I appreciate it.