Nice relaxing smooth jazz type tune. I agree the quantization kills the feel of this song. Relax that and you will have a much nicer piece. Enjoyed the listen

I like it. It's an interesting melody. I think it would be some sort of mood music for some British movie. I recently viewed "A Clockwork Orange" and thought this song would have fit in there somewhere or a movie like it.
 
I'm a fan and I have to agree with evadianepug, it needs another section.

DigiBiu
Nice relaxing smooth jazz type tune. I agree the quantization kills the feel of this song. Relax that and you will have a much nicer piece. Enjoyed the listen

thanks for the listening and the reply..
there's not software quantization  on tracks. I have just playing parts again and again, many times at recording to get the timing into place. Maybe I've done  too perfect job.  

Guitarpima
I like it. It's an interesting melody. I think it would be some sort of mood music for some British movie. I recently viewed "A Clockwork Orange" and thought this song would have fit in there somewhere or a movie like it.
 
I'm a fan and I have to agree with evadianepug, it needs another section.

Thanks for the comment and listening. 
Yeah, sure this is a bit simple... I did this tune for live jamming .... chord progression and the beginning theme

Interesting. as noted though no sense of feel.
 
Thanks for sharing.

as far a writing an original composition goes yeah , this song has a good melody and harmony ...
to take it to the next level i think you would need to speed it up a touch and give the drums a real swing big band beat .
 
Kenny

Wookie
kennywtelejazz
Thanks for the comments

I love this - sounds like a 30's or 40's tune.
 
Good job.

I too like the retro feel on this song -- and --- I always like the sound of a vibraphone.
No additions to the comments above.
Nice one!

MarkusClinus
Freddy J
Thanks for comments and listening

I like it.  The sax plays in a swing feel and the drums are in straight time.  Maybe that is intended.  Clean sound too.