kennywtelejazz
Yeah , you guys sound great together James  very nice all across the board …
Classic James on the Les… 
say, hows your fingers doing after doing all that fancy bass work ?  ..
 
Kenny

 
Thanks Kenny! 'Classic James'..hehe..same old **** eh? I was quite pleased with that bassline..it's a patch from DimPro, played with 2 fingers and a thumb on keys

Wow James - this is so good - so professional. And you're right the lyrics are top-notch.
 
Great!

What a great tune and performance.  If I am supposed to know what the lyrics mean, I missed the boat.  HOWEVER, I know they must mean something because they are so good.  This was really a treat to listen to.   I sincerely mean that.  Love his voice!!

daryl1968
Luverly mate
 
- glad you're still part of the kingdom

 
Cheers Daryl! Me too.

batsbrew
great composition, and a great feel.
 
it was very quiet, i assume this was not mastered?
it sounds better turned way up...
it is reminscent of gabriel on some of genesis early mellow stuff..
 
at 5:21 it is getting long, for only having 1 or 2 basic chord changes...
that said,
it has a nice reflective and calm vibe,
so it works over time.
 
i wonder if a key modulation in the entire middle section, dropping back down to the current key, for the final reprise,
wouldn't be a better choice?
 
really nice tune

Thanks Bats, that's nice of you. Not mastered no, I never do with individual tracks, just a smidge of compression on the master bus. Not sure about the modulation thing..I enjoy the song as it is, and there seem to be enough changes to keep it interesting. Hey, Pink Floyd have one chord intros longer than this song..

Lynn
This is a wonderful song!  Tim's voice has the texture that sends this song over the top and delivers the lyrics so well.  Even though this song is a little quiet, as Bat says, it breathes and has good dynamics which gives this life.  Kudos to the both of you!

Thanks Lynn. Tim voice and lyrics on this song make me immensely proud to have been involved with it.

Beagle
Hey James,
I really like this!  Love Tim's voice, haven't heard any in a while!  love the electric lead and the pad.  acoustic sounds really nice, too.
 
I think I agree with bat that I could have used a modulation or something to shake it up a little for the length of the song.
 
but all in all, really really nice work!

Thanks Reece!

thegaltieribrothers
Great song + nice mix, good job!

 Thanks Brudders!

MarkusClinus
Wow James - this is so good - so professional. And you're right the lyrics are top-notch.
 
Great!

 
Thank you Mark!

evadianepug
What a great tune and performance.  If I am supposed to know what the lyrics mean, I missed the boat.  HOWEVER, I know they must mean something because they are so good.  This was really a treat to listen to.   I sincerely mean that.  Love his voice!!

Thanks Warren The best lyrics can mean many things to many people, so no explanation necessary. He does have a great voice eh?