Notice: This song may contain some words people might find offensive.  Sorry about that but it is not over the top.  Promise.
https://soundcloud.com/jmasno5/douchebag

People here dont like bad words. but overall nice mix. I think you should work on the harmonies

drma173
People here dont like bad words. but overall nice mix. I think you should work on the harmonies

Thanks drma173.  I'm not hearing what you are concerning the harmonies but I'm done with this song anyway.  It's all about fun for me.  I'm working on the next song which is about my two dogs (with no bad words).   I'll checkout your tunes.
 

Liked it... catchy tune.  I'm no expert on mixing but the mix sounded very good over here.  But if the song ever started going anywhere, you may have to change the title and wording a bit... lol.  Enjoyed the listen!

Excellent mix with everything in its place.  It has a nice, open sound with good panning so that it doesn't sound narrow.  I'd be interested in hearing your next song.

pluto
Liked it... catchy tune.  I'm no expert on mixing but the mix sounded very good over here.  But if the song ever started going anywhere, you may have to change the title and wording a bit... lol.  Enjoyed the listen!

Thanks.   LOL.  Yes, the song will have to be silenced mid-word or something like:
Everyone knows you are such a  _ick
They won't say it
but you are a  _ick

and a d_bag

Lynn
Excellent mix with everything in its place.  It has a nice, open sound with good panning so that it doesn't sound narrow.  I'd be interested in hearing your next song.

Thanks Lynn.  You have had kind words for me before.  Checkout https://soundcloud.com/jmasno5/something-always-comes-along  I took tracks from my Tascam 244 4-track cassette recorder.  Remember those things?   Tascam actually repaired it for me a couple of years ago so I could salvage my old tunes track by track.

I listened the other day but was not sure how to respond. I agree the mix is well done and I love the sassiness of it. It reminds me of Steely Dan.
 
Well done.

Very unusual idea: a character assasination number, something like John Lennon's How Do You Sleep(or Dylan's positively 4th Street), couched in a smooth blues rock rock groove, reminiscent of the Atlanta rythm section. The lyrics are an unrelenting series of ad hominum attacks and generic insults directed at some loser fellow whom you liken to a disposable female hygiene device. Given all that, I think its pretty darn cool, with double entendres and unexpected rhymes in the lyrics. I don't think I've ever heard 'dick' and 'prick' rhymed before in a song. I really like the contrast of the smooth, seductive 70's instramental, with the abusive, angry lyric. Production values are really good. Cool project, overall.
 
Cheers,
Bert

Guitarpima
It reminds me of Steely Dan.

+1, but not the lyrics Good groove, and tasty solos.