Hi All,
 
Some of you may be familiar with Findenzio a.k.a drma17 on the forums who has got some skills on pop production that I liked. I offered to try something out with him a few months back and we finally got to crank something out that fuses some club, pop and rap together.
 
The last dance is written about a girl that I met a while back....as per usual, fuelling the song lyrics.
 
Check it out and let us know what can be improved
 
https://soundcloud.com/findenzio/last-dance
 
Cian

Not necessarily my style, bit it sounds like a pretty good pop/dance mix here.   Nicely done.
 
 
BTW.... "I remember the Bee Gees".   Ha!   
 

Cian, I've been a fan of you and Tony for some time.  I'm delighted that you two collaborated on this song, as it contains the best of the both of you.  The song and arrangement are very good.  The mix sounds balanced and open, and I have no suggestions to make it better.  I'm looking forward to hearing you guys on the radio someday.

Nice work guys. It sounds good and I used to play the Bee Gees on the turntable when I was a kid.

Awesome singing. Good track. Everything sounds as it should. Nicely done fellas.
 
Gus

great stuff...I think I'd bring the vox up a bit...the sound stage overall is very wide and has lots of breath...so the vox needs a bit of boost to have it come into it's own....it's really needed in the falsetto parts....
 
great tune!

Love the 80's feel t this one Cian. I commented on SC! Love it!

Thanks for all your comments guys.
 
I think this actually feels like a "complete song". I reckon I need to re do my vox to help fit the beat of the song better and the vol increase on the falsetto parts is a good point.
 
Tony's mate did a really good job on the rap, its clever and delivered well.
 
Cian

Very nice work Cian. Tough for any critique for me here, I would love to hear it over a club system to see if the bottom end really punches. I liked it a lot.

sounds good .. well done nice song