Here is my new song. been working a friend of mind on this tune
hope you guys enjoy.
 

That's a nice melody Tony, cool backing too. The rap sections were a little weak I thought, and  they sound too dry/upfront against the track to my ears..but I'm no expert on the genre. Your productions get better and better tho, keep it up.

As Starise wrote on SC - nice clean mix.   I do agree with James though that the rap sections are a bit thin and up front.  Perhaps a doubled vocal and a bit of saturation might happen fatten them up?
 

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As Starise wrote on SC - nice clean mix.   I do agree with James though that the rap sections are a bit thin and up front.  Perhaps a doubled vocal and a bit of saturation might happen fatten them up?
 

Im working on it I decided to take the rap part out because im no longer friends with the rapper.

The link isn't working for me, Tony.  I'll try later.

I like melody. The rap should be really edgy maybe like sounding like it comes from a telephone.
Don't worry about your spelling. There's a lot of us that aren't so good at it.

Your stuff is nice.  Nicely mixed and great stereo separation.  Nice use of delays.  Good job!

Tony, your mixing skills have improved so much that you are getting your message out - loud and clear.  At some point it becomes like judging cooking;  how many herbs and spices to add to a mix becomes a matter of personal taste.  I like the suggestion to differentiate the rap part so that it stands out from the rest of the song, but if you left it as is, I would have no problem with that.  The good part is that we are now able to hear your songwriting skills so much better and are able to hear your vision.