Hello good people!
 
I'm new here and I decided to put my newish song here to get some tips. The chorus is too repetitive in my opinion though I made some variation into it. I need you to tell me what's good about the song and what's bad in a constructive manner if possible. I'm still learning so be nice...:D
 

"Classic..."

It sounds exactly like John Cage's 4:33. You forgot to post a link.

Kakku you need a few more posts before you can add a link it is all part of the anti spam filtering process of this forum.

Hi!
Thanks for the replies and especially for the info about URL:s not working without enough posts. I will soon re-send posts with working links I hope.
kakku
P.S. (kakku=cake)