https://soundcloud.com/washedup-3/i-dont-mind-if-you-stay-a-little-longer
 
You know how it is on a first mix... too close the project and it's easy to lose perspective. Any and all thoughts are welcome.
 
Enjoy :)

Very good for a first mix. Nice song.
 
The bass is a bit to loud and hiding the bass drum. It's hard to tell about the guitars because of the bass but I suspect their fine. Nice vox!

Thanks, yeah it's always the bottom end I have trouble with. I believe you :)

yeah, I can't hear the kick for the bass.  I like the panned guitars.  drums overall need some more work.  help them to cut through the mix.  give that snare some snap.
 
good work so far

Good song, nice guitars - good job!

As noted the bass is dominating the bottom end, perhaps a little surgical EQ in the bass to give the kick some space, it also helps to add a little emphasis in the slap part of the kick just to give some definition.  Having said all the song has potential just need to do a little tweaking with fresh ears.  Thanks for sharing. 

Thanks for the comments and input... soon as my ears get a rest from the weekend gigs I'll give it another go and take it up a notch ( or is that down regarding the bass )....

I agree that getting the bass reigned in would be first stop.   But I think some of the vocal lines here and there might be a bit rushed, particularly in the first half.  Then again, there are a lot of lyrics to fit in some spots.  
 
Good song!
 

I think you're right Steve, but I have to admit I was at first happy I got them words in with any intelligibility lol.
 
I got sidetracked with some paid sessions (yay) so this one is on hold for just a bit.