Steve , this song brought a smile to my face for a lot of reasons ….
all last week I watched The Mummy on AMC just to see the scene where Rachel Weisz had the veil covering her face and her eyes were glowing . I was able to get there in less than 60 seconds flat listening to your tune

anyway, back to your song .
Yeah , this is great that you are doing this type of thing . You can experiment with new sounds and styles , stretch your chops , have a little fun and who knows where something like that can go ...
I did enjoy this for what it was as it played …I'm not gonna offer any crits because it's not my place on this type of thing
I heard a couple of sections thematicly that could have easily sat well in a film or a visual presentation.
cool stuff man
Kenny