I'm with you, Matt. I like the first one better.
As the others mentioned, still a little too clean.
Narrow the EQ even more, a bit more distortion, and lots more reverb to put it down the street.
Maybe add a verrry slow flanger to get that doppler effect?
If I were the producer, I would probably want the effect of the truck in the neighborhood, not in my living room.
Know what I mean?
I think you are pretty good on the context, and really close to nailing the sound.